Blog Unbound Monday!

Monday Nov 24 will see the next Blog Unbound! It’s called Sex Toy. Set in the same universe as Roleplaying, and is another indirect sequel to it.

Synopsis: Ron’s girlfriend Janice decides to take his prostitution joke more seriously than he ever imagined.

Tags: Prostitution, male-female sex, lesbian sex, foot fetish, latex fetish

On a slightly different note, I may do reviews of erotica ebooks in the near future, on top of the occasional EMCSA reviews. All time permitting of course!

10 25 2014 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative
WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative
Possible spoilers below …

WITHIN
The Dolls of Kelly Thompson (mc mf ff) (new)  by Bob Jowl
–2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)–

The writing was generally polished, minus a couple glitches. However, the main character was rather uninteresting from the start and not really likable. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t think a character has to be likable, but it can help. Didn’t see much in the way of justification, while I generally skimmed this. A workplace backdrop is kinda touch and go for me, and it certainly didn’t keep my interest here.
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)

Halloween Screams: An Anthology of Sapphic Treats (mc ff) (new)  by Madam Kistulot
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

A small, almost nitpick right off the bat is how this was thrown up all at once. There are plenty of weeks in October to throw up a halloween anthology! Anyway, definitely plenty of polish. Not everything was to my tastes, but I did like the anthology-esque late night Halloween story feel. As mentioned, there’s a lot to read here, and I unfortunately didn’t have the time to get too deeply into these. Still, while not everything pushed my arousal buttons, the stories themselves were fine. I’m sure I’ll get around to reading these more deeply eventually!
(ReReadability: moderate / follow: no)

WITHOUT
Submission Collar (mc) (new)  by Silver Nerd
~~ 3/5 (decent, not perfect)~~

The writing was just fine and vivid, and that helped to make up for any lack of depth. Not too much to say about this one. Not bad overall.
(ReReadability: Low / Follow: no)

RANDOM COMMENTS
I really do think its best to spread out a multipart story in this context, anthology or no

Blog Unbound: Beachfront

Disclaimer: This adult short story is a work of fiction. It is meant for those eighteen and older. There is sexual and graphic content. All characters are eighteen or older. Though there are inspirations from other fictional sources, any similarity to real people, live or no, is merely coincidental.

Authors Note: This is a further edited version of the 2013 Halloween special Beachfront, which was the first multipart Blog Flash. The darkly erotic story follows a small group of young friends meeting at a beach house they knew well for a small Halloween party. The owner stumbles upon something strange before her friends arrive. Enjoy!

Unbound Edition: eBook

Beachfront

Part I

“What is that?” the woman whispered to herself amongst the failing light of a clouded dusk. She stood at the edge of cave she knew since childhood. The failing light failed to invade its small gape, which was only ever accessible by beach at low tide …

“Jackie?” the auburn haired Linda called out to her friend inside the musty cabin at dusk. The aging generator hummed noticeably in the background, failing to overcome the incessant whoosh of the ocean. Linda was dressed like a slutty Vampire for their intimate Halloween party: black fishnet stockings, black mini skirt, tight black biker shirt showing maximum cleavage, and nothing else. Her well made, fake fangs rested in their box in her shiny black purse.

“She said she would meet us here right?” Jim asked. He was dressed like a deranged mad scientist with a green jumpsuit and white gloves.

“That’s what she told me over the phone!” Jim’s girlfriend Janice clarified. The blonde was dressed like a slutty catwoman with drawn on whiskers and a pointy eared hair thing. She wore black fishnets, tight black T-shirt, leopard colored miniskirt, and leather jacket. Though the costume looked half-assed on the surface, she worked hard to develop tabby-like tan lines along her body.

“Do any of you have her number?” Jim asked “I assume she’s been here. Door’s unlocked, everything seems ready, her car’s outside …”

“Yeah, I’ll text her,” Janice said, taking out her phone. She sent Jackie a text asking where she was …

While they were unloading their cars, Janice received a text from Jackie saying she would be back soon. She didn’t say where she was, though, or how she got there. It added an odd air of mystery, while it all was supposed to be an offbeat Halloween party!

Jackie’s family cottage was a great place for parties large or small, and more than a few were hosted there. The private ocean beach just a quick walk down some steps alone made for some great parties! Indeed, they’ve all been there many times.

They were drinking and enjoying themselves, music in the background, when the front door suddenly opened. They all jumped. It was the raven haired Jackie.

“Where’ve you been?” Linda asked curiously, slurred. The lights violently flickered at the old generator’s sputter.

“Nowhere,” she replied with an odd smile. The slim but healthy woman wore a tight, black T-shirt, tiny black short shorts, and flip flops. Her feet and ankles were noticeably sandy in the weak yellow light.

“What are you supposed to be?” Jim asked, slyly looking the sexy woman over.

“You’ll find out!” she replied excitedly. “Let’s get this fucking party going!”

Jackie grabbed a bottle of amber beer, and quickly chugged it down. They were all amazed by her behavior. She was normally a bit quiet and held back.

“Spin the Bottle?” Jackie suggested.

“Sure!” Jim answered, while his girlfriend playfully punched him on the arm. Janice was not the jealous type, and didn’t care if he flirted for fun.

Jackie had them all sit on the rug in front of the fire. “This is a special game of Spin the Bottle,” she said happily. “You will kiss the person it lands on like normal, but you will also have sex with them.”

They were all taken aback. Janice and Jim were considering sex while there, but none of them expected a Halloween orgy!

“You all agreed to play my game, so that is what we’re doing!” Jackie said deviously. She spun. It landed on Jim, who quickly looked over to his amazed girlfriend. Jackie crawled over Jim, and said to the unbelieving Janice. “Don’t worry, Jan! I got a condom for him!” Like a magician, she pulled a condom seemingly out of thin air.

The two were soon making out, tongue and all. Jim seemed a bit hesitant at first, but he found himself going with it very fast. The others could only watch mesmerized. They excitedly removed their clothes. Almost at the same time, Jackie ripped out the opaque condom, and put it on his throbbing member with her mouth, briefly giving him a blowjob. Before he knew it, she was riding his cock on top widely, excitedly. They moaned and grunted like wild animals, Jackie even more wildly. Holding her self tightly, she soon came in wild orgasm moments after Jim.

She unmounted the worn Jim, and happily exclaimed, “That’s how you play spin the bottle!” While he was still lying shell shocked, Jackie removed the condom with her mouth, and tossed it in the fire. “UMMM! Cum and cherries. Fuck yeah!”

“I’m, err, I’m gonna go get some water …” Jim said tiredly. He put his clothes back on, and left the living room.

“Well, OK!” Linda exclaimed. “I guess, I’ll take his turn.” She was very amazed with herself, when she took the bottle. She never considered even kissing a woman before, but she was somehow going with the game happily. She spun: Janice.

Linda scooched over to Janice, who said with subtle discomfort, “Kinda a virgin with, you know, girl-girl …”

“Me, too, Janice!” she said happily, blatantly looking Janice over. “Glad you’re really hot … Let’s just kiss, and go from there.”

They leaned into each other, and pressed their smooth lips together. Their eyes naturally closed to absorb how good it actually felt. Soon, they stopped thinking, and let their tongues explored one another’s mouths. The feel of their soft lips, the inviting taste of their humid mouths, this was with best kiss of their lives. The heat of the joyous fire enhanced their tingling sensations.

The two breathless woman pulled back to remove their clothes, save for their stockings, for reasons beyond them. Naturally knowing what to do, while admitting to themselves how arousing their naked bodies were (Janice’s feline tan lines drove Linda nuts), they scissored their legs, and made out passionately with their wet pussies. They starred deep into their ferocious, passion filled eyes, before grabbing a stockinged foot. They slobbered all over their foot, while rubbing it all over their face. The fetishistic action drove them into a wild scissoring frenzy. The moans and coos were loud and wild. While their faces dripped from foot tainted spit and sweat, they screamed in the most powerful orgasm of their lives …

Linda and Janice were lightly laughing in the afterglow, still entangled in a scissor, Jackie said happily, “I guess you’re not virgins anymore!”

“Nope!” Linda confirmed playfully. “Definitely not, Jackie!” Janice confirmed with equal joviality. The lights flickered again.

Janice glanced at the dim lights, feeling an odd shiver down her spine. “I, ah, I better go check on Jim, guys …” she said breathlessly. They said they’d be waiting for them, while she redressed, and she left …

Part II

“Oh, there you are, Jim!” Janice said happily, walking into a dark bedroom. “You missed me have some great sex with Linda. I am not joking, Jim!”

“Oh, yeah?” he said hazily, leaning on a lamp table.

“What’s the matter, Jim? What’s wrong with the light?”

“Nothing, nothing, Jan. Burned out bulb …”

Smiling, Janice sat on the blued moonlit bed. “Let me make you feel better, Jim.”

A few moments later, he walked over to her, and suddenly forced her down. The old springs creaked in protest. He made out with her aggressively, far more aggressively than she would normally allow. Yet, she found herself enjoying the attention.

Jim suddenly flipped her onto her stomach, and more than helped her onto all fours. “OOOO! Kitty-style, Jim?” she asked happily.

Unceremoniously, he flipped up the miniskirt, and plunged his large cock into her dripping pussy. It felt bigger than usual, while his almost painful aggressiveness made her quickly forget that implausible observation. While it was again far too aggressive for her normally, she quickly found herself loving, lusting the attention. She moaned and screamed like she was in orgasm, but she was still far from it. Her eyes kept rolling back into her head. Fuck, the sex was more awesome than the sex with Linda or anyone! She didn’t want the pleasure to EVER end.

Then, Jim suddenly stopped, and pulled out.

“Hey, baby, what are you doin’? Put it back in!” she exclaimed, thinking he was teasing.

Jim teasingly rubbed the tip of his cock on her tight asshole. He was no longer quite the same person somehow, he was starting to realize, while he was not done changing. It didn’t make any sense to him, even though the secrets of the universe were all but clear to him now. Still, the only drive he had was to fuck her up the ass and more.

“Oh, all right! How ‘bout getting some lube or … FUCK!” He suddenly shoved his massive member into her now painfully stretching anal cavity. Her screams quickly turned from pain to amazement to utter ecstasy. Everything was changing rapidly, while she could feel his cock growing deeper and deeper into her at every wild thrust. Her feet elongated and pointed, while her legs slightly shortened, as her hips changed, to accommodate the reforming structure. Her toe and fingernails grew out and became like claws. At the same time, she naturally propped herself up on her now feline-like feet and legs.

She could feel his cock go deeper and deeper, somehow linking with her as it went. It was now clear to her that it was what was changing her. Her jawline noticeably pushed itself forward, as her nose morphed into a snout, pleasurably. Whiskers quickly jutted outward. Upper and lower fangs became prominent, as her teeth sharpened, while she happily swirled her elongated tongue around her changing mouth. She found herself purring and growing at the same time while her tailbone jutted out into a long tail, which Jim sucked on happily.

Janice’s eyes began to feel very strange, and begin to blur. She briefly closed them tight, before opening them wide at a powerful thrust, which made her fake ears go flying. While some colors seemed dulled, everything in the room seemed sharper, brighter. Her pupils were now slits enlarged almost to a circle to let in more light. At the same time, her ears became pointier, more rounded, allowing far more to be heard. Indeed, all her senses were greatly heightening.

The changes were as physical as they were mental. Her mind as she once knew it left her. Her intelligence and memories were fully intact, but instinct was far more powerful, perhaps uncontrollable at times.

Janice’s transformation into the catwoman she secretly wanted to be was complete, but the had yet to cum in confirmation.

Jim thrust his still growing cock into her. It found its way into her throat by the time they began to convulse in a single, epic orgasm. The catwoman growled loudly in orgasm, while Jim exploded within her, causing massive amounts of cum to spew out of her gaping mouth …

Not long after Janice left to look for Jim, Jackie and Linda were sitting on the couch drinking.

“So what are you supposed to be, Jackie?” Linda asked subtly slurred from the alcohol.

“Something special,” she smirked teasingly. “Hey, you’re supposed to be a Vampire, right, Linda? Put those fangs in for me!”

“Sure!” Linda didn’t find them that comfortable earlier, and that’s why she kept them off for so long. She was buzzed more than enough to not care then, though, while she cared even less about the generator dying right then, leaving only the fire and moonlight. After fishing in her purse for a few moments, she picked out a small box. She took out the ceramic, moderately sized fangs, and carefully fitted them. Linda smiled toothily, and subtly lisped, “You like?”

Very sexy, Linda!” she exclaimed truthfully. She then chugged her beer bottle down, and pointed it at Jackie. “I took the next turn, and the bottle landed on you!”

“Oh!” Linda exclaimed, more surprised over how she was not opposed to what her friend was suggesting.

Linda leaned in somewhat cautiously, mouth slightly open, fangs slightly visible. Their full, moist lips met. They pressed into each other with deep breaths of passion. Jackie teased her friends lips with her tongue, and was quickly granted access. With great lust and want, they explored their hot and humid mouths. The taste of alcohol on their spit excited them. Jackie soon concentrated her tongue on Linda’s sharp, fake fangs. They moaned and cooed with dark joy.

Suddenly, Linda pulled back breathless with a big fanged smile. “Woah … You are a great kisser, Jackie!”

With a deviously lustful smile, Jackie took Linda’s fake fangs out of her mouth. “Thank you, Linda.”

Linda felt a rush of shock, feeling her now all too real fangs with her fingers and tongue. “What? … No …”

“What’s wrong, Linda?” Jackie asked deeply.

“What the fuck! My fangs are real!” she exclaimed in utter shock.

“Are they? … It’s just a trick I learned recently. Have fun, Linda. Go with it!”

The shock melted away at Jackie’s words.

“Hiss at me, and bite my neck, Linda. Just a fun game. Halloween, remember?”

With an almost dark smile, Linda fully exposed her fangs and loudly hissed as her “prey.”  Licking her lips, Linda pulled Jackie’s hair and head to this side, before easily plunging her sharp fangs into Jackie’s neck. Jackie began to scream intermittently in perpetual orgasm.

Linda’s eyes went wide, as her pupils dilated. She didn’t expect to be tasting and swallowing large amounts of blood, let alone pierce a neck! A part of her wanted to stop herself from drinking the blood, but the sweet, iron rich, salty flavor was better than anything she ever tasted in her life! Indeed, her body began to writhe in orgasmic pleasure, while it processed what she began to realize was inhuman blood. It was transforming her, conforming her. Linda could feel her body reform to only consume red hot blood. She lusted for such change before she knew it was possible. She always dressed as a Vampire for costume parties after all.

Though a part of her once felt shock over realizing such a thing was possible, Linda began to embrace her burgeoning Vampire self. Though more than enough transformative blood was spewing down her throat, she began to suck at the neck hard, wanting, needing it all! Linda moaned and grunted like a wild animal, while Jackie continued her endless orgasm, unfazed by the massive blood loss.

Soon, Linda drank so much blood that her body stopped processing it, and simply stored it in her stomach. Linda finally pulled her blood dripping fangs out. No matter how much she wanted to continue, her body was simply overflowing with Jackie’s blood. She lay on the floor literally breathless. She only needed to breath if she wanted to speak. Overflowing blood dripped out of her wide open mouth. The woman was now an eternal Vampire, and smiled happily, bloodily at the thought …

Jim and Janice walked into the fire glow of the living room naked, not as amazed by the sight as they thought they should be. Janice, in spite of her elongated, paw-like feet, was standing upright, albeit somewhat awkwardly with the help of Jim. She was rather feline after all!

Linda retracted her fangs, and stood slowly. Breathless, she walked over to the catwoman, and sniffed her almost like a hungry animal. Janice did the same in kind, but it was out of greeting instead of the instinctual need to asses possible food.

Linda took a deep breath, and stated, “You both smell quite good!” She licked her blood stained lips. “I won’t ever need that much blood to survive …” she said to herself.

“I think I like the sound of that!” Jim exclaimed, finding himself turned on by Linda’s retracted fangs. He knew her bite would simply lead to blood loss not death, if that was her intent. Indeed, his mind ascertained the secrets of the universe, and already surmised the reason for everything with perfect accuracy. Nothing was to surprise him anymore.

“Wrowww … you smmell different, Linda,” Janice observed, “and so does Jackie, I understand now.”

Linda turned to Jackie sitting mischievously on the couch, and stated, “She doesn’t taste Human, I am quite sure!”

Smiling darkly in the flickering firelight, Jackie answered, “I was dressed as a Succubus, and now that is what I am … and more … Come with me, and I will show you the miracle that can change everything …”

Blog Flash: Interview With a Demoniac Succubus

Disclaimer: This fictional story is meant for adults only: 18+. It contains highly sexual and graphic themes, many of which may not even be possible. For adults, enjoy!

Author’s Note: This story was a long time coming. It was meant to be a companion piece to A New Friend, but it just took a little longer than I expected to get back to Interview.

Blog Flash: Interview with a Demoniac Succubus

“What are you?” I asked confused. Though she looked Human, I believed her when she said she was a Succubus. As a freelance reporter, I was never one to take anyone at their word.

“I am what I am,” the very tall, voluptuous, utterly gorgeous redhead stated. “You’re looking for a story, my pretty thing. I’ll give one to you, but no one will see it as real!”

“Try me,” I offered breathlessly, clicking on my voice recorder.

“As I see you believe, I am a Succubus … but not exactly the kind of myth. None of my kind are born this way. We’re not exactly demons either. I’m sure we inspired those demon myths, though!” she laughed, her bright white teeth mesmerizing.

“How did you become a Succubus? How do any of you become a Succubus?”

“Being the overall gray of the world.”

“What does that mean?”

She smiled with both lust and love. “I lived a life of both love and lust all those years ago. It’s rare that you find someone so neutral as me, and even rarer that I found one of those special caves. I made love to my lover, and fucked the shit out of others for the mere pleasure. I now screw men and women for the betterment of this world. My job now is both punishment and reward for my actions as a Human.”

“You weren’t truly neutral, were you?”

“Perhaps not,” she said ponderously, “but I can say with some certainty that I am now.”

“So, about how you became … you?”

“Yes,” she subtly smirked. “I found the cave traveling to see some family. Was lost a bit. While the driver was finding his bearings, something called to me. I felt it in a way I didn’t understand then. I followed that pull, and walked into the cave. It was dark, but only at first. The deeper I went, the more alive the stone was around me. It glowed green. I walked in further, and the green colored world around me developed a thick, viscous liquid. It moved like it was alive, as it was. I was utterly mesmerized …”

I was utterly captivated by her story. No one would believe any of this, but I at least was given the gift of knowing it.

“Then, I saw it!”

“What?”

“What I was meant to find, I suppose … A semitransparent green blob. It was enough to engulf me if I crawled in on my hands and knees. That was what I did. It felt warm and like home in the blob. I wanted to stay in it forever,” she said in ecstasy.

She continued happily, “Suddenly, the liquid thickened into tentacles before my mouth, ass, and vagina. I opened everything wide to accept the viscous blob into me. The large tentacles forced their way into my holes so hard it hurt at first. They plowed through me until the three ends met deep inside, and began to pleasurably pump the goo into me. I felt the days, weeks, months as they were, as much as I felt them as passing moments. I was transforming! My eyes became yellow and catlike. My skin became silken and deep red, while it became like latex in appearance. My nails grew sharp, long and black. And I grew! My muscles strengthened, as the became far more efficient than any Human. My body gained height to the point of being seven feet tall. My senses enhanced, while my ears pointed. And, the rest …”

“Yes?” I breathed.

“A long, thick tail grew outward to a distinct triangular point, while large horns grew out from my head! Powerful, glorious wings grew out from between my shoulder blades like icing on the cake.”

“Why do you look Human to me? Where are those horns, that tail?” I asked confused.

“Power over the mind was also given to me, as all my sisters. I know, because are connected subconsciously,” she stated. “You see what I want you to see, but I will show you my true form.”

“Can I see it now?” I asked amazed and fascinated.

“I only show my true for to Humans during feeding.”

“Feeding?”

“Feeding is ultimately our purpose. As a means of keeping an underlying peace on this world, we eat the souls of sin, while we make love with souls of love.”

“There’s still plenty of war …”

“There aren’t very many of us. Then again, you haven’t blown yourselves into oblivion, have you?”

She took my hand in hers. “What are you doing?”

“I suppose, true neutral is a lie we tell ourselves and others, if only to explain why feeding on lustful flesh is just as good as the taste of loving pleasure. We all feed in our own way. For those of sin, some like to rip out the throats first, and hear the quiet gurgles of pain while they are lustfully consumed down to the soul. I prefer to hear the powerfully true screams of pain while the flesh of sin falls down my throat.”

My heart raced while she stuck my fingers in her humid mouth. She slowly pulled them back out while scraping them past her sharp teeth. Her tongue clearly took in the flavor.

“For those of sin, I start at the extremities: the toes, the fingers,” she drooled, while illustrating with her silken hands. “Then move on to the hands, the feet; the arms, the legs …”

I was becoming lost in her sensual touch. My pussy grew warm beneath my skirt.

“I can hear the screams of the sinners, as I shoved the limbs down my throat countless times!”

The Succubus passionately rubbed my warming pussy to better illustrate her own pleasure. My mind was turning to mush.

“Are you ready to know your true nature, Human? Are you ready to see my true form?” she asked powerfully.

“Yes, PLEASE!” I exclaimed.

The powerful being stood before me on her suddenly bare toes, clearly far taller in appearance than she appeared when this madness began. Her clothes disappeared, if they were ever really there. She was like an amazon goddess! Her skin then turned red and shiny like polished rubber; her nails became talons; her wings and tail faded into reality.

“I am yours,” I breathed. An amazon sized succubus stood before me in all her demoniac glory. What else could anyone proclaim?

She blinked her catlike jewels, and proclaimed deeply, “You are of love, my dear. We shall now make love, and your essence will truly become you.”

The red, winged goddess tenderly yet strongly placed me onto the gushy carpet. My clothes were already gone, as if they were never there. She slit open her tongue on her sharp canine, and kissed me deeply. Her sweet, salty trickled down my throat, leaving a part of her within me forever.

Suddenly, her heavenly pussy ground against mine. I moaned and cooed in utter orgasm. Yet, the orgasmic grinds was but the road to the ultimate eruption of pleasure. I tightly grabbed hold of her sleek, rubbery skin in the mind destroying waves of love. It was breaking me down, destroying whatever masks I wore in the outside world. I could feel the very essence of my soul climbing to the surface, all barriers destroyed. Looking deep into demoniac jewels, we screamed in a massive explosion of super-orgasmic love!

After a time of mindless afterglow, the freeing Succubus kissed me on the lips tenderly, lovingly. “You are truly wonderful,” she whispered softly in my ear. “Now go back to the world as your true self.”